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　　假定你是李华，想邀请外教 Herry 一起参观中国剪纸(paper-cutting)艺术展。请给他写封邮件，内容包括：

　　1. 展览时间、地点;

　　2. 展览内容。

　　注意：

　　1. 词数100左右;

　　2. 可以适当增加细节，已使行文连贯。

　　学生实例1

　　分数：24分 四川德阳中学

　　Dear Henry

　　I'm Li Hua, the leader of the paper-cutting club in our school. Last time you told me you looked forward to learning more about traditional Chinese culture. Now I'm glad to tell you there will be a Chinese paper-cutting exhibition held by our school. I sincerely hope you can set aside some time for the art feast.

　　The exhibition, the theme of which is "beauty of China", will take place in the school hall from 2 to 5 on the afternoon of June 21. Not only will our club's works be displayed, but we also have a valuable set of paper-cutting created by a famous artist of this field. Besides, there will be a lot of useful and interesting activities, from which you can have a clearer picture of Chinese culture.

　　I would appreciate it if you accept my invitation. I'm sure it can leave a wonderful impression on you! I'm looking forward to your reply.

　　Best wishes!

　　Yours,

　　Li Hua

　　1. 逻辑性较好，层次分明，连贯恰当;

　　2. 运用词块、句型丰富;

　　3. 个别用词需要改进比如说leader, leave a wonderful impression不符英语表达习惯;

　　4. 第一段不够简洁。